my remarks on personal recount blog
Monday, April 5, 2010
MY REMARKS ON BROOKE AND ED
Presentation and Layout-2
I gave this blog 2 because the important contents are easy to locate but the blog’s layout was not attractive. It was plain and boring.
Theme-1
There is hardly any theme at all; it is just plain white with blog entries.
Design and Graphics-1
There is no design or theme to this blog. It is just pain white pages filled blog entries.
Interest-4
The blog is mainly about a particular family and subject related to them. This blog seems to be meant to keep people related to this family updated with current situations.
Teamwork-4
There aren’t any spelling or punctuation errors in the blog.
Focus-4
The story doesn’t go out of point at all. It is always related to the topic.
Sentence and Paragraphs-3
The paragraphing was very good.
Language and Vocabulary-2
The language and vocabulary were very simple and to the point.
Sentence Fluency-4
The sentences were coherent and flowed well.
Spelling and Grammar-3
There were not many mistakes.
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